badnflunz
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#1
something i came up in like 2 min
crit plz

e|------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|----2h3p2h---------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--0-----------3h2p~-------3-2-3-5-3-2----------5--3-5-7--5--3-------7-5-8-7-5--7---------|
E|-----------------------1---------------------3--------------------5------------5-----------|
Last edited by badnflunz at Nov 7, 2005,
Shred 'n Smile
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#2
Yeah, sounds okay. The way I play the beginning reminds me of a Spanish, flamenco sounding sound. Not bad for two minutes. lol.
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#3
Simple, but nice. 8/10 Only thing I would change is the last powerchord. Instead of playing that, I would play 7 on the A string, then play 3 on the A string.
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badnflunz
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#4
S2-GreenDay-S2, do you have any tabs on here? i couldnt find any
les_paul_01
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#5
i found that playing a g powerchord at the end sounded better to me than an a. nonetheless its really good, perhaps you could put it into powertab and turn it into a whole song? nice work.
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#6
Really good. I agree, G power chord.
You should turn it into a whole song. (By the way I like the powerchord, i say keep it.)
Other than that good song, I like the whole thing, especially if it was made in two minutes!
Cuz it's so short that's really all i can say.
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humanpowerchord
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#8
Nice. Not bad for only 2 minutes. But instead of that power chord at the end i would do this
D--------------------
A--7------5---------
E----8~----7~-----

Then do into a chord progression using A to C to B
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#10
The A-C-B chords should be
e--0---0---0--------------------
B--1---1---0--------------------
G--2---0---4--------------------
D--2---2---4--------------------
A--0---3---2--------------------
E---------------------------------
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phunker
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#12
I liked it, the begining sounded very Black Sabbath, but it got airy near the end, giving me a unique feeling of hope coming back then being crushed again. Very good. I like the power chord ending, short and simple. A drawn out ending doesn't suit the mood of it. Very nice. Crit for Crit maybe?
Pure_Morning
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#13
I like it. Except for the end (instead of a powerchord):



A ----3h5p3---0------




Works quite well.

Good riff,

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badnflunz
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#17
i came up with an "improved" version
ill post 2morrow
and what does generic mean
Backwards_Logic
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#18
It's very good. I like this one. Very strange when played slow (in a good way ) I took the liberty of posting the beginning bit, which is how I play it. Seems to me to sound fuller.


e|------------------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------------------|
D|----2h3p2------------2h3p2----------------------|
A|--0--------2------0---------2------3p2-2~-------|
E|-------------1-3--------------1-----------------|
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Last edited by Backwards_Logic at Nov 22, 2005,
SsPunk
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#20
Generically, a sacriligeous epithet.
wat.
badnflunz
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#21
once again
whats GENERIC and "a sacriligeous epithet"
id look it up but im lazy