#1
ive been thinkin about making this into a song and i jusst wanted to make sure it sounded good. CRIT please

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#2
Hmm... it sounds realllly good, don't get me wrong, but it sounds like a song.. but I can't figure out what song...
#3
I find it difficult to Crit considering it's in tab, meaning finding the rhythm for this is almost impossible. However, I can find some melody into it by making my own rhythm for it and it sounds pretty good. You could change the last bass note to 3rd fret low E string.

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Or, to open E.

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But I shouldn't be changing the melody, It's not my song.
Honestly, considering this isn't something I would do in my style of music, I wouldn't use it but for a rock song it'll probably work out.
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#4
Sounds pretty decent to me the way it is, sounds like a song i cant out my finger on...
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#8
hmm not too bad, with the rhythm i put it with, it reminded me of December by Collective Soul (since we're trying to peg it)
#9
For those of us who are bassists, every thing is fingerpicked.........

I think this is good beat, what's the timing.....
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