Shred_Manifesto
Warheart
Join date: Nov 2005
333 IQ
#1
I was dickin' around a few minutes ago on my guitar, and came up with this neat little riff, just wanna know if any of you think it sounds good....


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|-------------------------------2-2----------------
|--2-2-2-5---2-2-2-7---2-2-2-5--2-2--7-9-10-9-7-12-
|--0-0-0-3---0-0-0-5---0-0-0-3--0-0--5-7--8-7-5-10-
   * * *     * * *     * * *    * *    

After you play that 2 or 3 times play?


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|--------5-------7-------5-
|--00000-3-00000-5-00000-3-
   *****   *****   *****


also, any ideas that you think i could add on would help to
Shred_Manifesto
Warheart
Join date: Nov 2005
333 IQ
#3
well im better at writin' melody's, leads, and solo type stuff, just wanted get some oppinions on this riff, i know it aint the greatest, but i think i can work from it,
And goddamn it does sound noobish, i never realized that, oh well