Hi, this is my first piece I've put on UG and looking to submit more (and post more on this site in the first place). Been working on this on and off for a few weeks.

Hopefully I'm looking for a band to perform this, if its deemed good. Please crit this and I will make sure to crit yours.


I liked it. very mellow, and i loved the solo
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Thanks for the comments.
My "Rig":

Fender American Telecaster
Boss OD-2
EHX Small Clone
A+ one of the best songs ive ever heard on here
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MXR Carbon Copy
Keeley Modded TS9
Korg Pitchblack
Schecter Omen 6
Dean Performer Acoustic

Eh...it was ok. Really calming song...Kinda makes you wanna just kick back and chill. I didn't care for the solo..it was too short..not much to it. Other then that it was pretty nice. I'd say on a scale of 1 to 10 this would be either and 8 or 9.