This is my first tab. Please tell me what you like or dislike about it thanks.
Last edited by DanteR* at Nov 13, 2005,
Join date: Nov 2004369 IQ
Hmm. Parts of it I liked but the dissonance got to me. Is it supposed to be like that? The intro was painful to listen to too. Thanks for critting my piece though.
I see your point ill see what i can do with it
Join date: Jul 2004229 IQ
dissonance is okay, only if u actually know how to use it effectivly to the point where ur listeners wouldn't piss themselves when they listen to it. overall, it was just too unorganized, you should try to pick a catchy melody and build around it
here i improved it greatly
Join date: Jun 2004206 IQ
sounds like some kinda battle scene music hehe