Shred_Manifesto
Warheart
Join date: Nov 2005
333 IQ
#1
im currently writin an instrumental thats heavily inspired by a movie i saw about a WWI Soldier who comes home from the war, and then 20 some years later, goes into WWII, Cant remember the name though..old 40s movie, but i want an intro thats kinda of like.....eerie forthcoming feel, like **** isnt gonna go right, just wanna know if this riff catches that kinda feel, its experimental, so cut me some slack here, usually i right well, just really fast ****, tryin' something new now, evenetually i'll post the solo for this song, but that might take a while

  
Clean Guitar             (---)This part is kinda of a questionable part of the riff
|----------------------------
|------------------------5---
|------7-----3-----5-------7-
|----9-----5-----7-----------
|--0-----0-----0-------------
|----------------------------
Its My World...You're In It,
It'll Take You Down In A Minute

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Last edited by Shred_Manifesto at Nov 14, 2005,
samwise_01
UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2004
657 IQ
#2
i like it at first i thought that second chord was disgusting but its grown on me in the past few minutes
"i know im not a real musician , merely a time keeper, but i dont deserve to suffer your arsonic ways"

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xjuax
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2004
11 IQ
#3
the second chord sounds disgusting because a B natural is played in the first chord and a B flat is played in the second chord. other than that, i liked it. i think it conveys that eerie feeling you're looking for.
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Shred_Manifesto
Warheart
Join date: Nov 2005
333 IQ
#4
i see your point, i think i know what i can do to fix that
Its My World...You're In It,
It'll Take You Down In A Minute

My Gear :

Schceter C-7 Hellraiser
Jackson JS30 King V ( coming soon i think )
Carlo Robelli Acoustic
Krankensteing ( Coming Soon )
Death Metal Distortion
Buddah Bud-Wah
Shred_Manifesto
Warheart
Join date: Nov 2005
333 IQ
#5
any suggestions for a replacement for the second chord
Its My World...You're In It,
It'll Take You Down In A Minute

My Gear :

Schceter C-7 Hellraiser
Jackson JS30 King V ( coming soon i think )
Carlo Robelli Acoustic
Krankensteing ( Coming Soon )
Death Metal Distortion
Buddah Bud-Wah
samwise_01
UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2004
657 IQ
#6
go one more down to an A
"i know im not a real musician , merely a time keeper, but i dont deserve to suffer your arsonic ways"

Quoted from bill off MSN

Also Quoted from bill

"drummers are really just less acurate metronomes"
##_Guitar-newb
Fat Scouse Sh|t
Join date: Jun 2004
983 IQ
#7
how ironic ^^ " i right well" lol ^_^
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