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Join date: Oct 2005
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i like the slow addition of more instruments! great song, very catchy.

i dont quite get the chords on line(s) 69, and others like it. what instrument is that supposed to be?
- FJ

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Last edited by flyingjew34 at Nov 15, 2005,
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Join date: Apr 2005
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wow. that was one of the most boring songs i've heard in a long time. no rhythm changes. i think you maybe used 4 chords the whole time with only minor variations...if any...and the strings added a little power to the song
if i cut off your arms and legs
and wrap you in some fucked-up cocoon,
would you still look at me and say
"you can't catch what you can't see"
well i caught you honey,
like the clap sugar.
what do you think of that?
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Join date: Jan 2005
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Could you possibly put it in Windows Media Player format because I don't have PowerTab and would like to hear it?
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Lemon Fairy Liquid
Join date: Aug 2005
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I loved it, maybe record it properly with vocals though. It got a little boring with only the guitar going.

but great anyway
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Join date: Apr 2004
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I gotta say i got pretty bored. SHould definately get those vocals in
i've got a gun in my hand but that gun won't cock
my finger's on the trigger but that trigger seems locked
i can't stop staring at the tick tock clock
and even if i could i would never give up
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Join date: Jul 2004
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Yeah, it was really impressive for the minute, and then when the strings came it, it regained some interest, but even some of the best songs ever written, with vocals anyway, are repetitive, and almost always have to be so the lyrics fit. I think a good goal for you would be to mix up your guitarwork because you play/write awesomely.

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kyle, u have inspired me so much for the time that u have been here
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