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Join date: Apr 2005
35 IQ
A short instrumental I expanded from the original riff I made (you can't miss it).

I don't really have the full version of GP4, so I couldn't change the tempo whenever rhythm 2 and 3 are being played, but yeah, they should be played a tad faster than rhythm 1.
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Join date: Oct 2005
583 IQ
you should get PowerTab Editor. you can do everything you want for free.

i like, but maybe change a few notes so it's not so repetitive.
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Join date: Jan 2005
192 IQ
The riffs in it are okay, but the whole song is just waaay too repetitive and doesn't seem to have a construction, such as a Chorus, then Verse, Bridge etc.
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Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
ya its got a nice sound but its way too repetitive. try adding something in the background to give it more life.

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Join date: Nov 2005
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i am an aspiring new artist new to yhis website and i have nothing to do