Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#1
i screwed around with time signatures.
i think it turned out pretty cool.

BULIMIC IVORY

composers swallow phoenix feathers
and vomit up ash.
let's snort it like technicolour
lines of cocaine that spell out
anti-drug sentiments.
we're such a fucking contradiction,
so we act like we don't care
that these bulimic piano keys
just threw up melted ivory on our graves.
we act like we don't want to be remembered.
like we just want to be missed.
we're such a fucking contradiction,
so we slit our throats with safety scissors.
Attachments:
dsfodfoidfsmfs.zip

I just want to sleep forever.


Last edited by Grovermans at Nov 16, 2005,
piratepirate
shiver me timbers
Join date: Jun 2005
153 IQ
#3
wow. impressive use of changing time signatures. A lot of times when time signatures change every few measures or so it sounds forced and awkward, but your piece does it perfectly.
HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#4
Dont really like this piece...

It sounds like it wants to be melodic but crazy at the same time. And it tries that, and it doesn't go too well.

Yea.. Not your best, IMO
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flyingjew34
Opeth Afficianado
Join date: Oct 2005
583 IQ
#5
a bit random, but i like most of the riffs very well. the lyrics are a bit brutal though
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culex-knight
mon titre d'utilisateur
Join date: Jun 2004
400 IQ
#6
Very Opeth sounding IMO.
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Spark1284
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#7
for one whoever said this sounded like opeth is a moron... but regardless, im not a big fan of this mainstream quasi-hardcore stuff but i was very impressed with it, the signature changes worked really really well, and above all it just had some plain old good riffage going on, good work.
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soo much n00bage
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mangablade
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2005
863 IQ
#8
sounds like something you spewed out in 20 minutes with the thought of "im going to be original, but im gonna do it quick and half assed"
culex-knight
mon titre d'utilisateur
Join date: Jun 2004
400 IQ
#10
Quote by Spark1284
for one whoever said this sounded like opeth is a moron... but regardless, im not a big fan of this mainstream quasi-hardcore stuff but i was very impressed with it, the signature changes worked really really well, and above all it just had some plain old good riffage going on, good work.



Says O Lord Spark1284 who thinks "Slayer Rox".

Shut the hell up.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching