Smokey Amp
Run.Stop.Fierce.
Join date: Sep 2005
1,077 IQ
#2
Sounds good, very Modern Metalish.

Get a catchy bass line in there now.
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Mr. Mister
Join date: Aug 2005
610 IQ
#3
Eh...now that there is my problem..bass. I suck something awful on bass lol.
PickmeDude
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2005
133 IQ
#5
omfg i love that... sick dude
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Contraband
Within the Realm
Join date: Oct 2004
2,580 IQ
#6
It has a pretty good groove going. At first I thought the intro was a bit boring but after a few listens it catches on - those last few notes of the intro really get your attention. I guess you have a simple thing going on - power chords - modern rock/metal, which isn't a bad thing because you have a good base going. The only thing I'd suggest with that first solo - it winds up to much and then to nothing, you know what I mean? First you have a thing going with it and then....it cools off and you're waiting for something to happen. You should add more rests to the solos as well as some longer bends. Yeah, it needs more fills in between the verses, intros and solos IMO - something simple whether it be just some notes from E Minor on the acoustic or a a quick power chord progression in a bar or two. Anyways, good job with it - the solos just need a little more zest.
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PickmeDude
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Join date: Nov 2005
133 IQ
#7
i love it, simple as that
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