VigilantPost
druunk!
Join date: Nov 2005
32 IQ
#1
I've had this little thing down for a while now, and I'm not sure what to do with it. It reminds me of a scene of two friends parting ways, and one of them being shown walking down a wooded path. I don't know, that's just me.

line it up better by putting it in Notepad

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Any comments or suggestions are greatly appreciated!
Does anyone ever truly think outside the box, or do they merely expand the perceptions of what that box can handle?
-Gregory Piquet (Nov. 3, 2005)
evvo_gc_fan
UG's Telecaster
Join date: Dec 2003
406 IQ
#2
Quote by VigilantPost


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Any comments or suggestions are greatly appreciated!


thank me later for that.

EDIT: right, after arranging it, i like what i see and hear. you are playing a C, Am, C, Am progression there, and the notes added on the B sound very good. the notes you are adding B (open) C (1st fret) and D (3rd fret). you could use some of these chords in some way for a bridge or chorus. your notes for the Aminor pentatonic are A, C, D, F and G. mess around using these chords, and do what you want. sevenths, minors, diminished. go wild. id like to hear the end result, because the start is good.
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I liked it.
Is it about fucking?
Last edited by evvo_gc_fan at Nov 16, 2005,
VigilantPost
druunk!
Join date: Nov 2005
32 IQ
#3
Cool, thanks for the pointers. I've never been good at bridges, transitions or anything of the like. I think I might have a phobia of turning to chords when I'm playing a fingering melody; but, here's what I have come up with. It is 'meh', at best, I think.

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Does anyone ever truly think outside the box, or do they merely expand the perceptions of what that box can handle?
-Gregory Piquet (Nov. 3, 2005)
evvo_gc_fan
UG's Telecaster
Join date: Dec 2003
406 IQ
#4
thats a nice, simple expansion. G, F and D are good together. keep going!!
"What about the neighbours?? What they gonna say?? Stop little sister getting carried away" - SRV. The greatest guitarist of all time.
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I liked it.
Is it about fucking?
S2-GreenDay-S2
UG Newbie
Join date: Jul 2005
713 IQ
#5
Its good, but not great. Too repetetive.
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WishIHadAGibson
Banned
Join date: Nov 2004
510 IQ
#6
yah its basic, but the idea is there. thatll be a good 10 second bridge, perhaps.

i agree, go wild with some more odd chords and add some more transitions between them.
groove
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2005
449 IQ
#7
its reminds me of.." street spirit " or "dust in the wind "
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