Contraband
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Join date: Oct 2004
2,580 IQ
#1
Right, here's a quick progression that took a bit of time to make. I didn't have the most clear vision, but then I thought I knew where I was going, yet now I can't really think of where to go next - I got the first few bars of the verse right after a rather short intro. What was I thinking? Well, my influences include Slayer, Cannibal Corpse (if you're wondering why some parts sound a bit like Hammer Smashed Face), Nevermore, Opeth, Carcass, & some Necrophagist & Dimmu Borgir.
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Death from the Dawn.zip
I've found Jesus
Last edited by Contraband at Nov 17, 2005,
PickmeDude
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2005
133 IQ
#3
dude , f'in sexy
Pick me dude...

Where I come from my cars a piece of crap...
Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#4
pretty cool.

i'd suggest changing the
acoustic to something else though.
the artificial harmonics and just
most of its parts sound bad.

I just want to sleep forever.


Spark1284
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#5
ahh!! that was wicked, its liek a cross b/w dimmu borgir and modern metal
MYSELF INFLUECE I


soo much n00bage
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PsychoFreak
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Join date: Jan 2005
955 IQ
#6
Didn't like the AH, sounded out of place imo
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Contraband
Within the Realm
Join date: Oct 2004
2,580 IQ
#7
Thx for the criticism, I guess I'll work on removing that AH. It's just that if I put anything instead of it right in it's place it'll sound quite boring. I was rather fond of the rhythm, but I guess it'll have to be modified somewhat. I'll get back to everyone once I remake what I have, finish the bass line and add another verse.
I've found Jesus
ethereal sin
Mr. Mister
Join date: Aug 2005
610 IQ
#8
That was pretty sweet. You seem to have something here. Add more. I like the whole fast-paced death/black metal sound you have. It's like Cannibal meets Borgir.
Chubz
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Join date: Apr 2004
277 IQ
#9
dude this kicks major ass

I'm actually learning the whole thing
i've got a gun in my hand but that gun won't cock
my finger's on the trigger but that trigger seems locked
i can't stop staring at the tick tock clock
and even if i could i would never give up