Paint
UG Addict
Join date: Apr 2005
946 IQ
#2
pretty nicely arranged. the part that got annoying though was when you did the diminished note at the end of each repeat in the begining parts.
if i cut off your arms and legs
and wrap you in some fucked-up cocoon,
would you still look at me and say
"you can't catch what you can't see"
well i caught you honey,
like the clap sugar.
what do you think of that?
Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#5
no, grovermans does not like trivium.
he finds them lame and generic.

I just want to sleep forever.


gutsman
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2004
285 IQ
#6
it's really good constructed but I find it to be a bit dull. the riffs sound generic and it keeps following the same pattern which makes it very one-sided. also nowhere did i find any really catchy parts that really characterize a song.

imo ofcourse
Egrodyne
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2004
103 IQ
#7
Govermans stop rehashing your previous songs!!! *slaps* tut tut!!
Kicks Harder Than A Mule On Crack
Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#8
they're all in the same key,
but that's really the only similarity.

I just want to sleep forever.


Spark1284
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#9
and they all use the same two notes over and over, i like ur dissonant stuff more, but the 000088887777 gets a litttlee old, especially since every east coast punk band in the world uses it
MYSELF INFLUECE I


soo much n00bage
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Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#10
yeah it's a generic hardcore/emo/metalcore progression,
but i still do put some different spins on it sometimes...

I just want to sleep forever.