The2abraxis
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Join date: May 2004
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#2
im not a big fan of the metalcore, but you did a good job on this. Nicely strucutred and stuff, and mroe original than not (which is a veruy good thing)

my only comment is the solo. it sounds clashy and kinda out of key (not sure if it is), and it doesnt really have a nie feel to it. might wanna rewrite it
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
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#3
awww mannnn.... this was going as a pretty damn good metal song, then u had to make it all metalcorey, damn. very good job tho
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#5
seriously?
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#8
ROFL, 7 years ago.
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SoulShredder
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#9
Pretty cool actually, doesn't sound like typical metal core in fact, maybe if you change some riffs up a little it could sound a bit like symbolic era death.