#1
This is pretty simple but i think it sounds good.

It's in 6/8 time and all the notes in the first bit are the same length except for the powerchord at the end, which is held. Play it fairly slowly.

The second riff is chords, just figure out the rhythm yourself, but keep it in 6/8 time.

e|------------------|-----------------|------------------|-------------------------|
B|------------------|-----------------|------------------|-------------------------|
G|-------4-----4----|-------4-----4---|-------1----1-----|-------------------------|
D|----6-----6----6--|----4-----4----4-|----2----2-----2--|-2-----------------------|
A|-4----------------|-2---------------|-0----------------|-0-----------------------|
E|------------------|-----------------|------------------|-------------------------|

^INTRO (4 TIMES)

e|--------0--0--0---|-------0--0--0---|---------0--0--0--|----------0--0--0--0-----|
B|--------0--0--0---|-------0--0--0---|---------0--0--0--|----------0--0--0--0-----|
G|-6--6-------------|-4--4------------|-2--2-------------|-2-----------------------|
D|-6--6-------------|-4--4------------|-2--2-------------|-2-----------------------|
A|-4--4-------------|-2--2------------|-0--0-------------|-0-----------------------|
E|------------------|-----------------|------------------|-------------------------| 

^VERSE (4 TIMES)

What do you guys think??
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Ibnaez RG1570 Prestige
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Last edited by stratman_mjc at Nov 25, 2005,
#2
the first bar is ok....
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#3
I liked it. I don't think I played it perfectly because of the 6/8 time, but I thought it was pretty good. The verse kind of reminded me of "Crash into Me" by the Dave Matthews Band, but they're not similar enough for me to call it unoriginal.
#4
Cool, thanks for the crit.

The verse is pretty much just the powerchord with the two open strings at the top. I didnt really know how to tab it coz i usually just mix it around a bit, like play all the strings or just the top ones.

I'm hoping to turn this into some kind of song.
Gear:
Ibnaez RG1570 Prestige
Maton EM225C Acoustic
Fender Hot Rod Deluxe
Digitech DF-7 Distortion Pedal
#6
ok
Gear:
Ibnaez RG1570 Prestige
Maton EM225C Acoustic
Fender Hot Rod Deluxe
Digitech DF-7 Distortion Pedal