wonderboy47
Surly Sophomore
Join date: Feb 2004
166 IQ
#1

e|-----------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------
D|-----------------------------------------------------------------
A|----5h7-5h7--5h7--5h7---------------5h7--5h7--5h7--3-0-3-5-3-0---
E|-0-0--------0----0---5-0-3-4-5-3-0-0----0----0----------------3-5

It's difficult to transcribe exactly what I have in mind, but you can get the general idea. What do you think? I'd like to hear any suggestions you might have concerning this riff, and that includes whether or not I should just scrap it.
Chubz
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2004
277 IQ
#2
I dont know, I feel like i've seen the 0 0 5h7 a million times before, but it's a good riff nonetheless. Crit my powertab ? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=286010
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Registered User
Join date: Apr 2004
184 IQ
#3
i cant really say if i dont know the rythm to it i.e note values,crotchets etc
sounds ok though
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wonderboy47
Surly Sophomore
Join date: Feb 2004
166 IQ
#4
Quote by Chubz
I dont know, I feel like i've seen the 0 0 5h7 a million times before, but it's a good riff nonetheless. Crit my powertab ? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=286010

You may be right, I can name "Can't Stop" by RHCP and "No More Tears" by Ozzy Osbourne off the top of my head. I think my riff is different enough that it can be called original though.
stratman_mjc
UG Senior Member
Join date: Dec 2004
473 IQ
#5
It's not that bad...but i see the point that guy made where the 5h7 has bee used before.

Maybe after the first lot of 5h7's you could play a couple of powerchords leading back down to the E? Just an idea.
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