dittohead123
Ooh, do I love you
Join date: Nov 2005
450 IQ
#1
what are your thoughts on this song? how can i improve it?
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dittohead123
Ooh, do I love you
Join date: Nov 2005
450 IQ
#2
o yea and at the very end that was a mix up it wasnt supposed to be there.
90's Post Punk Emo<33333333
maddd0g
Underground Mod
Join date: May 2005
1,293 IQ
#3
Decent, but I dont like this style of metal, it doesnt have any fun to it.
BOLD.
saddam
Carcass
Join date: Apr 2003
1,808 IQ
#4
first of all, use bars, makes the whole thing look better and more structured. as for the song itself, i didn't really like it, it just doesn't sound good, whatever kind of metal it's supposed to be.
mingles
I am beautiful
Join date: Oct 2002
864 IQ
#5
to be honest, I didn't really like any of the riffs. song didn't have much flow to it imo.
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