NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#1

Rhythm (clean/ acoustic)
                                                                               
E||---0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
B||---1----1--1----1--1--0--|--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
G||*--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
D||*--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
A||---0----0--0----0--0--0--|--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
E||-------------------------|------------------------|--0----0--0----0--0-----|


                                                                                  
-------------------------||---------------0-----------|--------------0-----------|
--3----3--3----3--3--0---||------------1-----1--------|-----------3-----3--------|
--0----0--0----0--0--0--*||*--------2-----------2-----|--------0-----------0-----|
--0----0--0----0--0--0--*||*-----2-----------------2--|-----2-----------------2--|
--2----2--2----2--2--0---||---0-----------------------|--3-----------------------|
--3----3--3----3--3------||---------------------------|--------------------------|


                                                                                 
--------------0-----------|--------------0------------||--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
-----------------0--------|-----------------3---------||--1----1--1----1--1--0--|
-----------0--------0-----|-----------0--------0-----*||--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
--------2--------------2--|--------0--------------0--*||--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
-----2--------------------|-----2---------------------||--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
--0-----------------------|--3------------------------||------------------------|


                                                                           
--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|------------------------|
--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--3----3--3----3--3--0--|
--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
------------------------|--0----0--0----0--0-----|--3----3--3----3--3-----|


                                                                           
--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
--1----1--1----1--1--0--|--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--|
--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--|
------------------------|------------------------|--0----0--0----0--0-----|


                                                   
------------------------|--0----0--0----0--0--0--||
--3----3--3----3--3--0--|--1----1--1----1--1--0--||
--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--||
--0----0--0----0--0--0--|--2----2--2----2--2--0--||
--2----2--2----2--2--0--|--0----0--0----0--0--0--||
--3----3--3----3--3-----|------------------------||


------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Solo
                                                                 
E||-------|------|------|-------||-------|------|------|-------||
B||-------|------|------|-------||-------|------|------|-------||
G||*------|------|------|------*||*------|------|------|------*||
D||*------|------|------|------*||*------|------|------|------*||
A||-------|------|------|-------||-------|------|------|-------||
E||-------|------|------|-------||-------|------|------|-------||


                                                        
--17----------17--19--20--|--22--20--19----------17----|
--------------------------|--------------22~-----------|
--------------------------|----------------------------|
--------------------------|----------------------------|
--------------------------|----------------------------|
--------------------------|----------------------------|


                                                   
--20-19-17----19-17-------17----------------------|
-----------20-------20-18----20-18-17-20-18-17----|
-----------------------------------------------19-|
--------------------------------------------------|
--------------------------------------------------|
--------------------------------------------------|


                                                                            
--------------------------------------------------|------------------------|
--18-17-------17----------------------------------|------------------------|
--------19-17----19-17----19-17-------17----------|------------------------|
-----------------------21-------21-19----21-19-17-|--17b-----------19--21--|
--------------------------------------------------|------------------------|
--------------------------------------------------|------------------------|


                                                              
----------------------------------|---|----------|----------||
----------------------------------|---|----------|----------||
--17------19------21------19------|---|----------|----------||
------21------21------21------21--|---|----------|----------||
----------------------------------|---|----------|----------||
----------------------------------|---|----------|----------||




its not done yet hence why it cuts off, but it was just me messin around, it prob wont be developed more.
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Dante's Inferno
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Join date: Jun 2005
307 IQ
#2
Hear?

Btw,

e-string, fret 17 = B-string, fret 22

It's looking good though!
Last edited by Dante's Inferno at Nov 30, 2005,
NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#3
umm what do u mean hear?

anyways, i went and tabbed it in gp4 plus it has a midi.
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Dante's Inferno
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Join date: Jun 2005
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#4
It's hard to judge by trying play yourself without knowing the melody. And Powertab doesn't work on my mac
NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
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#5
well i added the midi right there so u can check out how it should sound. i know what u mean about hard to get the melody.
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Dante's Inferno
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Join date: Jun 2005
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#6
Holy ****, you're good man. Both the rhythm and lead are outstanding. Keep on going. Abrupt ending maybe, but that doesn't matter. Endings can be real hard. I think if you use 22 instead of 17, you can get that one-finger-per-fret formation, making it easier to play. It's so unneccessary to move the hand so much. But yeah, really good.
Last edited by Dante's Inferno at Nov 30, 2005,
n00blet
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Join date: Feb 2005
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#7
ye nice work ! seems pretty groovy if u have time check out mine https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287769 .
EDIT: i like the solo as well simple but fitting maybe doesnt need to end so abruptly (the solo as well as the ending)
Last edited by n00blet at Nov 30, 2005,
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#8
What you have so far sounds good. I didn't look at the full tab as I like to see if there's MIDI files now, so I was kind of expecting to see the solo go from the start, but where you put it worked extremely well. It did end quite abruptly, I reckon you should put a bent note in there to fade out for the time being and you can always go back and delete it or just add onto it. Good stuff.
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NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
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#9
ya it ends so abruptly cuz im not finished with it. i was working on it and got some writers block, so i just left it for the time being. ill work on it later.

thanks for all the reviews!
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ethereal sin
Mr. Mister
Join date: Aug 2005
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#10
Dude, that was really good, seriously. But when you play the arpeggios you should let them ring out. It would sound better. Other than that it was really good.
NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
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#11
^ its in GP4 so if i let them ring it sounds real nasty. but on real guitar its gd.
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FlyingBeerman
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Join date: Jan 2005
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#13
Instead of just playing the bass note at the start of the finger-picking, you might consider strumming the entire chord, and letting that ring out while you play the rest of the notes. That way the sudden switch from strumming to finger-picking isn't so jarring. Intro sounded great. Solo seemed a bit out of place.
NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#14
well i updated, theres really no continuation since i dont know where to go from there, but i used ur^ playing the whole chord idea and i made them all ring. i added drums and bass so it adds alot to the song.
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a1234.zip
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Hardin
Banned
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#16
It's beautiful, I'm in love with it, if that was a woman i'd be all over her
Zeppelin08
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#18
That's pretty sweet the solo is nice, keep working on it
Muppet
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#19
The solo is pretty nice.
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mrbounce
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#20
Letting it ring doesn't sound that bad in GP4, if you manually use the linking tool to make each fret line last until the end of the bar.
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NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#21
i have it set to let ring in the second zip file. ya it doesnt sound as bad as i thought
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