YSM404
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2005
150 IQ
#1
Heres something I made just messing around last night. I like the way it turned out. Tempo is like...medium to moderate?


e--------------------------------------------
b--------------------------------------------
g-------------44-------444--------4----------
d-----------4----4---4-----4----4------------
a-------22---------2---------22--------------
E---0-0--------------------------------------

e--------------------------------------------
b-----44444-----4444----44444----------------
g---4-44444--44-4444--4-44444----------------
d---4-44444--44-4444--4-44444----------------
a---2--------22-------2----------------------
E---0--------00-------0----------------------

e--------------------------------------------
b--------------------------------------------
g-----22---2---2-----------------------------
d---2----2---2---22--------------------------
a--------------------------------------------
E--------------------------------------------

e--------------------------------------------
b-----44444-----4444----22222----22222-------
g---4-44444--44-4444--2-22222--2-22222-------
d---4-44444--44-4444--2-22222--2-22222-------
a---2--------22-------0--------0-------------
E---0--------00-------0--------0-------------


some Crit would be pretty rad, and appreciated.
I'll crit back...but I broke two strings since I wrote this, the high E and the D. Maybe after I get out to the shop.

Its really simple....I know, but I like the sound.
Last edited by YSM404 at Nov 30, 2005,
YSM404
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2005
150 IQ
#3
Thanks.
hm, I'll try and record it tommarow to give you a feel for it.

yea....the thrid section is just kinda a fill. Maybe if I through it as a short lead with some chords as rhythm.

I'll try out yours tommarow as well, too late to be playing guitar tonight.
hthedinga
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Join date: Nov 2005
1,536 IQ
#5
Pretty spiffy. If anything I'd say try to follow a set rhythm structure, such as having 4 beat per measure. Nice work.