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Join date: Feb 2005
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#2
hey, ye its good maybe u could add a cool clean bit after breakdown to make a better build up. oohh just got to solo very nice touch like it alot and interludes nice with that bass line. keep working good so far
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#3
So many different sections! It's not really my kind of thing at the moment, but yeah, it's not bad at all. Can you play the ending of that solo?
There were a couple of little bits that sounded not so great, and sometimes in the solo it sounded as though it went a bit out of time almost, but other than that, most of it seemed pretty good.
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#4
i don't think the dissonance
was used well when you used it.
the constant palm-muting rhythms
got really annoying to me.
i didn't really like the solo either.

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saddam
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#5
the dissonance i thought is something you need in a death metal song...
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#6
no, i didn't say you shouldn't have used it.
you just used it in the wrong spots
and in the wrong ways, i thought.
like... you've got 3 bars of a systematic riff
and then on the last time, you decide to
add dissonance to it, but keep it systematic.

i just don't think it really worked.

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#7
Its pretty good, the solo was good, the riffs for the most part were good but like its been said the dissonance doesnt always work, for the most part it does quite well but the one i thought that really wasnt working was in the chorus in the 2nd bar on the 2nd little melody part. The first note works but the second doesnt, other than that I liked this song, check out mine if you can https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=289753 thanks
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#8
can you make a midi of it please? and check out my latest metal song
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#9
I thought it was pretty good. Death metal ain't really my thing, but there was some killer riffing in there. Solo was done nicely, had some sweet licks in it.
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#10
if death metal isnt theses peoples things, then they shouldnt be commenting... from one metalhead to another, i loved it, ESPECIALLY the solo, i dont know HOW u made it work with all the chromaticism. there were a few notes here and there i personally didnt like much, but this was an excelent metal piece... great job and keep it up
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#11
kinda repetetive to me, but hey, slap in some lyrics and stuff on this baby and u've got one smoken death metal song. Sound kinda egyptian-ish to me but i like it.
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#12
had a pretty good groove, but I didn't like the fact that both guitars play the same thing basically :/ and you've got too much fast open string palm muting going on - everything you play on the low B is really monotonous and the riffs need more variety.

It's not bad really, just the only thing that's interesting is the first few times you play that intro. Everything else is bland. And the solo - no offense but scrap it. It's got all these little fast parts that should sound orgasmic but don't end up doing so in the end.
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#13
I'm a metal head. I liked it. The solo needs some work... it just needs some more fill to it. Other that I actually thought the song flowed well. I could imagine the drums going in the background. Good job dude.
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#14
I thought that was pretty damn good. Add vocals/other instruments and I'd be pretty interested on hearing a final product. Nice job man.
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#15
hey, i've changed some parts in this song, and some solos, just a small update. I'm still working on an ending though, maybe someone can help me out? it's all finished until after the 2nd solo, so...
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#16
I thought it was great..you have a knack for death metal. Keep up the good work.
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#17
..midi please?
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#19
that interlude with the volume swell: very creative!
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