#2
I like it, gj man
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A mirror revealing
The depths of my heart
Then I will write
The darkest song
For without
Forgiveness
My soul is lost
#3
hey man really great stuff. say, did use an amp for any of the songs?
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#4
pretty cool, you should have used a metronome, your timing came off every now and then. other than that good job.
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#5
dude ur riffs were boring and stock if u kown what i mean by stock as in its pretty basic...........ur timin came off too and just by adding a lot of distortion does not make it a metal riff sorry but i dditn like it
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#6
I really liked the intro. But a few of the song parts were a bit off, pretty good though.
#7
yeah intro was good but timing wasn't, keep working on it though
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#8
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dude ur riffs were boring and stock if u kown what i mean by stock as in its pretty basic...........ur timin came off too and just by adding a lot of distortion does not make it a metal riff sorry but i dditn like it


damn man, his timing may be off and the riff may be "stock" (its not a ****ing car btw) but that dosent mean u can jsut blast him like that. i mean who are you, ozzy osbourne? i still say that its a good solid riff. it needs to be worked on sure but any dumbass wouldve known that...
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#10
i really like this. add some drums, vocals, and bass and you've got one hell of a song. keep up the good work.