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#2
really good ! liked the piano parts really nice touch check out mine if u have chance its a better one than the one u commented on before hopefully, still not as good as urs but uve probably been playing longer https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287769
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#3
thanks a lot dude i'll check your's out.

ps it was a lot better than the last one lol
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#4
As of now it is just piano, 2 guitars, bass and drums. but i am adding a bunch of other stuff in now including bells and a vocal melody and am changing some of the beats a lil.
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#7
thanks and yours was awesome
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#8
I like the double bass, hehe, Don't see that in a midi often.
Didn't really get boring at any point, nice guitar fills, some really kickass riffs.
Would be an awesome song to see live, what with all that double bass ^^

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#9
i used tabit, not guitar pro.
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#10
i liked that nice riffing and the drum parts were pretty cool.
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#13
awesome, even as a midi that was really good. as said before, the drums were good and i liked them as well
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#15
thanks a lot guys, and ill check out all your songs.
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#18
thanks for the comments keep em coming!
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#19
could you pm me or post the tab for this I really want to play it.. lol
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#20
yeah i'll post the tab lol

edit: download attachement
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#21
i just realized that didnt have drum tab in it?

sorry guys maybe ill post it later
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#22
that was pretty sweet, do you have any lyrics for it? there are so many possibilities with all the fills and such...you can really go out on a limb with this one...great job
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#23
thanks dude

this song is amazingg
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#24
Nice song, some of the double bass seems a bit too fast in a few places, if it can possibly played.

The guitars are cool and the piano is a nice touch. Good work

How do you write your songs, do you start with a guitar riff and expand on that?
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#25
Man this song is sick!! I love it. Kinda has this distinct sound to it. The soloish part at like 22 seconds is awesome. Has that trivium style mixed in with an older midevil sound that comes after it. Amazing.
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#26
Its Awesome, Id definately Buy it anyday! I loved the drums and some of those licks were awesome, one thing i didnt like was that little random sweep that comes it just before the chorus cos it seems to come in at the wrong place of finish at the wrong place.

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#29
Guitar sounds a bit too bright for metalcore. Maybe just my style.
Still sounds good.
Piano.. eh. I really dont think it fits very well.
Drums sound pretty good. Ahaha. I sense some As I Lay Dying double-bass influence there.

Yea. The appregiated piano chords (that's what they sound like to me) really dont fit well for me.

Guitar work is good. The piano goes better with the clean part (I think I heard piano there?)
Liked the solo. Piano harmonizing actually went pretty well.

Overall, I liked it. Not bad.

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#30
you asked me for a crit of this song but i noticed i already have replied to this about 6 months ago haha, but just to make sure it doesn't seem like im ignoring you and refusing to give you a crit im replying again lol, anyways just listened again and i still like it so good stuff haha
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#31
umm.. ok.
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#32
Woah that was sweet. Is that double bass even playable? Anyway, intro was pretty cool, as well as that piano part right after it. The rest of the song was awesome. I liked the solo part was pretty sweet, but I didn't really like the piano/guitar part right after it. But the outro after that part was cool.

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