GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#1
I was going for a hardcore/metalcore approach i suppose...

168bpm

Intro

Guitar 1+2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|000-101210000-8108000-575000-787------------------------------------
D|000-------000-----000----000----------------------------------------
pm:::       :::     :::    :::

Guitar 1+2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X1
A|000-101210000-575000-353000-010-------------------------------------
D|000-------000----000----000-----------------------------------------
pm:::       :::    :::    :::

Guitar 1+2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X1
A|000-101210000-8108000-575000-787------------------------------------
D|000-------000-----000----000----------------------------------------
pm:::       :::     :::    :::

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|000-101210000-8108000-575000-787------------------------------------
D|000-------000-----000----000----------------------------------------
pm:::       :::     :::    :::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|000-------000-------000----000--------------------------------------
D|000-------000-------000----000--------------------------------------
pm:::       :::       :::    :::


Verse

Guitar 1+2
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------X2
A|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|00001012100000810800005750000787------------------------------------
D|0000------0000----0000---0000---------------------------------------
pm::::      ::::    ::::   ::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
D|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
pm::::      ::::      ::::   ::::


Chorus

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----X2
A|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
pm::::::::::::::::::::::::::::    ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----X2
A|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----


Verse

Guitar 1+2
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------X1
A|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------


Interlude?

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------1010109-----------------------
A|---12-10--12-10--81087--12-10--12-10--------------------------------
D|-00--0--00--0--00-----00--0--00--0--00------------------------------
pm ::  :  ::  :  ::     ::  :  ::  :  ::
                                                                        X2
Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|----------------------------------------13131312--------------------
G|---14-12--14-12--1012109--14-12--14-12------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------
A|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|-00--0--00--0--00-------00--0--00--0--00----------------------------
pm ::  :  ::  :  ::       ::  :  ::  :  ::


Intro bit again...

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|00001012100000810800005750000787------------------------------------
D|0000------0000----0000---0000---------------------------------------
pm::::      ::::    ::::   ::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X2
A|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
D|0000------0000------0000---0000--------------------------------------
pm::::      ::::      ::::   ::::


Verse


Guitar 1+2 (all downstrokes)
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------X1
A|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------
D|0-0000005-5555558-8888883-3333330-0000005-5555558-8888883-332020-------


Chorus

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----X1
A|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
D|0000000055555555888888873333575700000000555555557777777833332020----
pm::::::::::::::::::::::::::::    ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----X1
A|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----
D|0-------05-----58-----87----57570------05------57-----78----2020----

Outro


Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|00001012100000810800005750000787------------------------------------
D|0000------0000----0000---0000---------------------------------------
pm::::      ::::    ::::   ::::

Guitar 2
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------
G|----121412----101210----797----9109---------------------------------
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------X4
A|0000------0000------0000---0000-------------------------------------
D|0000------0000------0000---0000-------------------------------------
pm::::      ::::      ::::   ::::

piquet
repetitive repetitive
Join date: Jan 2006
781 IQ
#2
Nice and menacing. At first, I played it on my acoustic, which was ... meh. Then, I tried it on my 'lectric with the gain all the way up, and it rocked...
*'-'*
UG's Bastard of Christ
Join date: Aug 2005
1,290 IQ
#3
I am of the opinion that this will sound good, but im to lazy to drop to d to check it out. And the interlude look familiar?
Quote by masterohumans
there is something wrong with you that has nothing to do with that instrument you want to build.
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#4
I dont know, i made it up out of the blue. The only thing that it is loosely based on is Unholy Confessions by Avenged Sevenfold
Matt_Malmsteen
Shred n00b
Join date: Jul 2005
363 IQ
#5
Nice, I can play it because I'm lead guitarist for our band
But never the less it is good, could use a solo though, get writing!!
'If you wish to make an apple pie from scratch you must first invent the Universe' - Carl Sagan.
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
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#6
Quote by Matt_Malmsteen
Nice, I can play it because I'm lead guitarist for our band
But never the less it is good, could use a solo though, get writing!!




You've yet to proove to me you can play it

...and write your own damn solo
Horvat
Gravis Metallus
Join date: Jun 2005
458 IQ
#7
Good, but you should do more with the straight power chords in the verse to make it more interesting. I suggest adding some tiny lead breaks, just for a second or two, between some of the chord changes. Just like a quick pentatnoic lick or something.
*'-'*
UG's Bastard of Christ
Join date: Aug 2005
1,290 IQ
#8
Ah Ha. The interlude looked similar to the verse riff of like light to the flies by trivium. But it siunds dif
Quote by masterohumans
there is something wrong with you that has nothing to do with that instrument you want to build.
master ed
Banned
Join date: Feb 2006
50 IQ
#9
its ok..again i will say..pretty basic and looks like some other song i no...definitely need a solo...its ok but i dont think it will go anywhere without some serious long hours of work..sorry to be hard dude
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
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#10
Quote by master ed
its ok..again i will say..pretty basic and looks like some other song i no...definitely need a solo...its ok but i dont think it will go anywhere without some serious long hours of work..sorry to be hard dude


S'ok, might inspire me to actually do some work

Shame i don't have the musical ability to improve >_<
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
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#11
Ok, these are some other little bits that i came up with and may try and fit in with the rest of the song. Any good?

e|13------13------13------13------12------12------12------12------
B|--161413--161413--161413--161413--151312--151312--151312--151312
G|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------
A|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------

e|10------10------------------------------------------------------
B|--131110--13111013------13------11------10----------------------
G|------------------151312--151312--131110--121091210-------------
D|---------------------------------------------------1312~--------
A|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------


Git1
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B|------------------------------------------------------------------------
G|------------------------------------------------101010101010101099999999
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555101010101010101099999999x1
A|0000000055555555888888883333333300000000555555558-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-77777777
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555------------------------

Git2
e|----------------------------------------------------------------
B|----------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------23------------------------------23----------------
D|22222222333355--222222223333552022222222333355--2222222233335520X1
A|----------------------------------------------------------------
D|----------------------------------------------------------------
pm::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Git1
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B|------------------------------------------------------------------------
G|------------------------------------------------101010109999121212127777
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555101010109999121212127777x1
A|0000000055555555888888883333333300000000555555558-8-8-8-7777101010105555
D|000000005555555588888888333333330000000055555555------------------------

Git2
e|----------------------------------------------------------------
B|----------------------------------------------------------------
G|--------------56------------------------------56----------------
D|55555555777788--555555557777885-55555555777788--555555557777885-x2
A|-------------------------------8-------------------------------8
D|----------------------------------------------------------------
We_Wont_Die
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2006
292 IQ
#12
The verse looks suspiciously and sounds suspiciously like 'Alive' by P.O.D.
Speaking of which, does that stand for Payable On Death?
Quote by Anton Szandor LaVey
He who makes a beast of himself takes away the pain of being a man.


My Lyrics:

Silent Oblivion
Bacio
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2005
69 IQ
#13
At first glance, it looks simple and uninspired. I have to say though, it sounds much better than it looks, even if you're using a crappy 5watt training amp.
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
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#14
Quote by We_Wont_Die
The verse looks suspiciously and sounds suspiciously like 'Alive' by P.O.D.
Speaking of which, does that stand for Payable On Death?



So it does, purely coincedental i tell ye!

That is what it stands for
Ramoon
UG's mushroom hunter
Join date: Sep 2005
435 IQ
#16
Total pwnage! but ermm...do you have to fit in the two tabs added later on by your own feeling or do you have any suggestions on how to make the song more succesful? Anyways as I said: Total pwnage! keep up the good work!
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#19
This is part of the bass tab I wrote:

g|---------------------------------
d|---------------------------------
a|----------------------787--------
D|0000353255557875888810---33332020


Theres more to it but i'll put that up later