kepple
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2006
40 IQ
#1
oki doki this was a song i made up by accident. I was just messing with my friends guitar and there we go! This sweet song was made. It's been through tons of mods and came up to this, the solo tho needs to be much better. Plus i was told that i should introduce the sonjg being slow then speed up, but hey lets do the fast one

Intro
e -------------------------------------------
b ------------------------------------------- x 4
g -------------------------------------------
d -0-3-5-0-5-6-0-3-5-0-3h5/6-6-6-6-
a -0-3-5-0-5-6-0-3-5-0-3h5/6-6-6-6-
d -0-3-5-0-5-6-0-3-5-0-3h5/6-6-6-6-

verse
e --------------------------------
b -------------------------------- x 8
g --------------------------------
d -0-0-3-0-0-5-0-0-6-5-3-0-
a -0-0-3-0-0-5-0-0-6-5-3-0-
d -0-0-3-0-0-5-0-0-6-5-3-0-

on 4th and 8th time this is played on the lead guitar (rythm still plays verse riff),
4th-
e ----------13^----------15^-----------16^-15h16p15h16p15-
b -15-15--------15-15--------15-15--------------------------------
g -----------------------------------------------------------------------
d -----------------------------------------------------------------------
a -----------------------------------------------------------------------
d -----------------------------------------------------------------------

8th-
e -----------------------------------------------------
b -----------------------------------------------------
g ----------10~----------10~----------10-12~---
d -12-12--------12-12-------12-12---------------
a -----------------------------------------------------
d -----------------------------------------------------


Intro to chorus
e ------------------------------ x 4 ( on last play 12's 5times not 3 after first twelve)
b ------------------------------
g ------------------------------
d -6-5-6-12--12-12-12----
a -6-5-6-12--12-12-12----
d -6-5-6-12--12-12-12----

Chorus
e ------------------------
b ------------------------ x 4
g ------------------------
d -6-6-5-3-5-0-3-5---
a -6-6-5-3-5-0-3-5---
d -6-6-5-3-5-0-3-5---

then back to main riff (intro)
e --------------------------------------------
b -------------------------------------------- x 4
g --------------------------------------------
d -0-3-5-0-5-6-0-3-5-0-3h5/6-6-6-6--
a -0-3-5-0-5-6-0-3-5-0-3h5/6-6-6-6--
d -0-3-5-0-5-6-0-3-5-0-3h5/6-6-6-6--

Lead solo
e --------------------| |--------------------------------|
b --------------------| |--------------------------------|
g --------------------| x 4 |--------------------------------| x4 then goes to...
d -0h3h5-0h5h6--| |---17p15-------15~-15-15--|
a --------------------| |------------17-----------------|
d --------------------| |--------------------------------|

e ----------------------------| |----------13^----------13^-----13^---------13-15h16p15
b ----------------------------| x 4 |-15-15-------15-15--------15-------15-15------------------
g ----------------------------| |------------------------------------------------------------------
d ----------------5-0-3~---| |------------------------------------------------------------------
a ----------3h5-------------| |------------------------------------------------------------------
d -3h4h5-------------------| |------------------------------------------------------------------


THIS ISN'T ALL FINISHED YET, I'LL POST 2ND SOLO PART AND OUTRO SOON, GOTTA GO BYE!!
Vedder
Sexual Harassment Panda
Join date: Mar 2005
314 IQ
#2
cool...intro vaguely reminds me of blew, by nirvana.
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gomezisastud07
UG Rockaholic
Join date: Oct 2004
353 IQ
#3
not a good riff....insanely boring......im not sure anyone gets that by using drop d tuning and playing just power chords is not awesome......no offense but throw a riff........theres none.......solos short and boring too.........work on it again
GOMEZ
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tank_o_O
UG's ultimate weakling
Join date: Jun 2003
70 IQ
#4
i loved the riff dude it sounded pretty cool to me, heavy distortion played pretty fast, the intro sounds sweet, although it sounds exactly like that one song from Drowning pool, the intro does, its called Step Up i think
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FearOfTheDark1
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2006
35 IQ
#5
I like the intro and the verse but the lead like you said needs a little work. Too much stuff in a little area maybe try spacing it out a little bit it might sound better. Overall good tab i like it