maddd0g
Underground Mod
Join date: May 2005
1,293 IQ
#2
Pretty cool, I can see why it took you four hours. The tempo changy part in the intro is kind of akward though.
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HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#3
I agree with maddd0g on the intro.
It's really weird with the tempo changes.

I really like the rhythm part starting at bar 27.
The lead guitar is good pretty much throughout.
From bar 39-46, it seems really cluttered. It sounds kind of bad because the clean guitars are doing lead style stuff, but then the bass is also doing a lead style. It doesn't clash well.

For the most, pretty good.

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el57
sometimes... nevermind
Join date: Sep 2004
216 IQ
#4
****in brilliant. I love the intro... not awkward at all. lead guitar is real good... keep writing i want to hear more of it!