PsychoFreak
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#1
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The second guitar is just the bass. Tell me what you think. (Put lots of heavy distortion on and use heavy palm muting)
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THC
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#2
Your quote says it all, nah im just kiddin' its a good start though. add more to it and work on it.
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PsychoFreak
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#3
Lol Ty

I'm kinda stuck. I dunno how to write a melody that will fit well over the top of it.
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#5
i'm in the same boat as you, i had a little go at making up a melody line to go with it and i couldn't. Keep trying it sounds good.
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#6
looks like a generic metal riff. needs some original sounding hooks over it if you want it to be good.


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#8
pretty cool, it would be good to be played as the rhythm behind vocals. pretty good htough
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CptMorgan
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#10
Its not a bad start, like somone said earlier it does sound a little generic. It needs its own flavor on either your guitar or the second guitar, something that sets song apart from others. Obviously once you get your drummer to play something with it, youll have a better idea on where to go with it, works that way with me at least.
Well At least I liked it
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#11
Quote by THC
Your quote says it all, nah im just kiddin' its a good start though. add more to it and work on it.


dude, in your sig, that riff of yours, how do u get it to...make that sound..lol, sounds real newbieish, but then again, this is my 2ns post, is it just a lot of reverb?
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#12
I like the second riff, but instead of going back into the original riff afterwrds, use riff 2 as a pre-chorus, and then make up a chorus riff to go with it
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#13
Cheers I guess you mean the last riff.

Here's an update with my own "sound" added to it.

http://killthecamper.tjbp.net/drownedhope4.mid
http://killthecamper.tjbp.net/drownedhope4.ptb
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PsychoFreak
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#15
Cheers. I was thinking of using one of the riffs to solo over. One problem though. I can't write a solo, plainly because of the fact that I don't know how to. Help please?
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#16
i listened to the last powertab and i must say i'm quite fond of it!! like they said it's pretty simple and genreric, but that doesn't seem to matter, it's good. The only thing you have to do is fix you powertab so that everything is correct!
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#18
Not Bad, i'm not to keen on the intro, but i still like it...well done. i like how it comes in after the intro, lyrics would work wonders to this.

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#19
What do you think I could change for the intro?
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#20
PsychoFreak, the acoustic guitar in the intro is a good idea, but the chords sound a little off for some reason. It would probably sound great live, though. I'm guessing the solo to this song will be awesome.