I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
heres somethign i just made up. i really appreciate crits so i can make this song the best it can be.
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

Drivin' at night
Join date: Jun 2004
579 IQ
really nice work getting the drums like that,i'm hopeless with them.

Overall it's pretty flawless,maybe try adding some harmony for the first riff but i'm just nit-picking.

The solo is pretty kick ass aswell.

It's hard to make improvements to metal songs like this,the song is genraly determined by how good the riffs are.

care to check out my thread?
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2005
955 IQ
You should record this tbh. Just seems to happy for a metal song. Sounds good though

Like the solo but the ending seems a bit unfullfiling.

Care to listen to mine?
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when I was A young boy
My father took me to the bedroom
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Last edited by PsychoFreak at Jan 23, 2006,