Silent_Scream1
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2005
894 IQ
#1
Heres a little something i wrote after one of my close friends happened to pass away. I could have done better with the title but thats what came to my head.

So i hope you enjoy!!!
Attachments:
Two Steps From Heaven.zip
Pure_Morning
Boo
Join date: Nov 2004
369 IQ
#3
Short and melodic, sorry about your friend too. I bet he would love this piece.
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Silent_Scream1
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2005
894 IQ
#5
Thx guys. but do you think theres any room for improvement or is there anything bad bout it?
HumanitysDeath
UG Board King
Join date: Jun 2004
264 IQ
#6
Pretty good.
It felt kind of empty to me though.
Like there should've been more of a chordsy-rhythm or something.
But still, it was great.
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zephyrclaw
comPOSER
Join date: Jul 2003
1,987 IQ
#7
Wow! The established melody is great, and the song would probably be even more effective to you, as it has significant meaning. I wouldn't change anything major in it, if at all. There's not much to say - fantastic work!
saddam
Carcass
Join date: Apr 2003
1,808 IQ
#8
this is a very good piece, it sounds kinda medieval sometimes. I absolutely loved it !!!
les_paul_01
UG Freak
Join date: Dec 2004
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#9
that was really , really nice. there is nothing that i would change, it all works so all. oh and sorry about your friend.
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slash_620
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Join date: Jun 2004
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#10
Quote by HumanitysDeath
Pretty good.
It felt kind of empty to me though.
Like there should've been more of a chordsy-rhythm or something.
But still, it was great.


agreed,but i still loved it,good job.
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