hthedinga
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2005
1,536 IQ
#2
verb kickers?

as for the song, it was pretty boring and generic. the solo was fast, but it didn't have much substance and didn't have good flow. i'd recommend having more contrast so the whole song, with the exception of the solo section, doesn't sound the same. you could have instruments rest, put in a lead or two, add instruments, an interlude. there are many things you can do.
PsychoFreak
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Join date: Jan 2005
955 IQ
#3
It was more or less the same all the way through. The solo didn't seem to flow to well either.
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zephyrclaw
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Join date: Jul 2003
1,987 IQ
#4
It's pretty good, in my opinion. I found it really catchy, even though it was quite repetitive. Add some vocals and it could really shine.
Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
244 IQ
#6
**** verb kickers, and **** this song... its unexciting, repetitve and incredibly mediocre. sorry
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