Dxking
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#1
Um, I know I just posted a different thread, but I just came up with a couple parts to a song I think will turn out better..I tried to work on what the people said in my last thread, so lets see how I did lol.
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Striketalonx
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#2
meh. waaaaaaaaaaay to based in scales/chords.
Overly so.
Its over kill.
But its an ok song for say...
a guitar book.
Keep working on it.
make the guitar solo more technical, but give it a melodic sense as well.
and change the chord proggressions please.

Edit: Lol, i just realized the irony of "too based in scales/chords". I meant there is not enough variation.
Cause all music is based in chords and scales.
lol.
Dxking
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#3
Oh, haha...What's funny is that I don't know any chords or scales, I was just messing around. I'm assuming you mean the intro though. So I'll see what I can do to change that. And the 'solo' isn't really a solo, just kinda a little riff thing I threw in there because it seemed to fit. As for the chord proggression, I suck at those, but I'll change it. Just a very rough draft for a song, thanks for the input.
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#4
ok...my first rule of thumb-arrpegiated clean sections sound way better with 'let ring' on.

change the 4th chord in the intro to 3,2,1,0.
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PsychoFreak
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Join date: Jan 2005
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#5
Seems a bit random imo
Quote by human-blasphamy
Didnt MCR do that song The Gay Parade It went like this
when I was A young boy
My father took me to the bedroom
and told me not to tell