slash_620
Drivin' at night
Join date: Jun 2004
579 IQ
#2
the intro is a bit jarred,the repeated 16th notes don't let it flow enough.

Lines 13-19 need drastic alterations.

Wait,i was wrong about the intro,when it comes in again it sounds ways better for some reason even though i don;'t think you've changed anything.

the solo type thing is really good aswell,so keep that,the intro riff and the outro but change the other part.
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Jankunas
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2005
315 IQ
#3
the, uh... "chorus" its great, very nice job. I didnt really like the intro, but I think its because its not really the type of music I like
Jankunas
Contraband
Within the Realm
Join date: Oct 2004
2,580 IQ
#4
Uhhh....good background video game music
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Night_Lights
I've been here too long
Join date: Jan 2005
863 IQ
#5
Quote by Contraband
Uhhh....good background video game music



i concur
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