Mr.Pink
Your guitar friend
Join date: Jul 2004
148 IQ
#1
hi this is a song I have been playing around with

e-12
B-----10
G----------11                   x4
D
A
E

e-9
B-----10
G----------11                   x4
D
A
E

e-------
B-12
G-----13                   x4
D---------14
A
E

e-------
B-10
G-----11                   x4
D---------12
A
E

This part basically will repeat in background. It's played clean. Ontop I was going to put some kind of solo/riff here's what I have so far

e-9h12--12/14-14h6p14--12--9h12p9
B-
G----
D-----
A
E

e-9h12--12/14-14h6p14--12--9h12
B-------------------------------------------12
G----
D-----
A
E


this is it so far. Lots of work to do but wanted to get some feedback,
thanks
fretsofhell
UG wanna be
Join date: Feb 2006
30 IQ
#2
On the third part take out the 14 and put in like 13 because 14 just sounds weird. Otherwise it sounds pretty cool at a fast tempo. Good Job