aic_rooster
Ion
Join date: Oct 2005
266 IQ
#1
so i wrote this intro and then potential verse riff....very easy...but perhaps still worthy of adding more to? What you think? Suggestions on where to take it further? also...could anyone tell me what key its written in? May be helpful so as to write chords for a chorus part or something later....

k here u go

Intro

E|---------------|---------------|----------------|----------------
B|---------------|---------------|----------------|----------------
G|---------------|---------------|----------------|-----0h1--------
D|--------9------|--------5------|--------2-------|----------2-----
A|-----8-----8v--|-----4----4v---|-----1-----1v---|----------------
E|--9------------|--5------------|--2-------------|--0-------------

Verse

E|--------------|-------------------
B|--------------|-------------------
G|--------------|-------------------
D|--------------|-------------------
A|-----1-----1--|-----1-----1b2-----
E|--0-----2-----|--0-----2----------
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Last edited by aic_rooster at Feb 9, 2006,
Kartman
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Join date: May 2005
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#2
Looks too me like it's in F#. I don't have my guitar with me, so I could be wrong.
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EZLN libertad
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Join date: Jan 2005
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#4
"have i ever told you about the KISS theory?"
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leo_p8
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Join date: Jun 2003
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#5
I don't know what to tell you buddy. For an intro the first riff is fine... just a little bland, try to add some fills or something if you plan on playing it more than the once. The second "verse" riff sounds nice enough... but... well... to be honest I never bought too much into that thing of "simple is always better". Although there ARE plenty of simple but tastefull and trully beautiful songs out there.

At what tempo are you playing this?
aic_rooster
Ion
Join date: Oct 2005
266 IQ
#6
its being played at somewhat of a quicker tempo maybe like 125bpm.

the tab doesn't really show it but in the intro, the first three notes are eigth notes and the fourth note is held for the remaining 2.5 beats.

if you know the song "sunday" by sonic youth, something along those lines.
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