White_Riot_1977
Joy Riding Danny
Join date: Feb 2005
109 IQ
#1
Ey up. Well this is some music I just wrote. It's not quite finshed but I was Wondering if you could give me some help or crit it. Whatever. Thanks. Oh and if you do mine, I'll do yours
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Hellcat.zip
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Last edited by White_Riot_1977 at Feb 18, 2006,
slash_620
Drivin' at night
Join date: Jun 2004
579 IQ
#2
Ok....

Well,the riffs you've got atm are pretty good atm,nice rythm and conssance,but they're repeated far too much without changing and the song suffers.

The intro riff should be repeated more and the verse riff less. Try adding a melody over the top or varying it.

The drums are great and work well with the song,especialy the mini breaks.

The solo was a bit sucky,the pedal note bit went on far too long.

Overall,it's a good song,but it overstays it;s welcome by a good minute or so.
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White_Riot_1977
Joy Riding Danny
Join date: Feb 2005
109 IQ
#3
Thanks man. I'll work on it. It's wierd how you say the drums work but I can't play drums at all !
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Last edited by White_Riot_1977 at Feb 13, 2006,
Night_Lights
I've been here too long
Join date: Jan 2005
863 IQ
#4
nice drums!


the main riff if you will, gets a bit old. add a melody over it! have a 2nd guitar doing bends and whatnot over the chords.

the solo is quite cool. very melodic, fits in nicely with the song.


overall i like the rockish vibe, but the riffs gets a tad repititave.
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pepajaktbs2
Banned
Join date: Feb 2004
230 IQ
#5
Very very nice riffs.

Really catchy, reminds of Ted Nugend a lot.

Really nice stuff, I really like it and it would sound even better with some singing over top.
Sum41DudeRob
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
1,011 IQ
#6
I really dig this song, I was playing this the other day actually lol. Nice work.
White_Riot_1977
Joy Riding Danny
Join date: Feb 2005
109 IQ
#7
Thanks for all your wunderbar comments. Are there any more? x
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