#1
This song doesnt have a title, i wrote it one night out of boredom lol. be gentle im only in grade 9 i just turned 15 in march lol

Verse 1:
A buzzing ringing in my ears,
the ball comes from the wall,
where did I go so wrong?
please tell me yesterday is gone,
I've got nothing to live or die for,
I can not find the truth,
with nothing on my mind but pain,
i seem to think of you
Chorus:
Sink into regret,
fall into pieces,
I can show you what it's like,
Sink into regret,
fall into pieces,
I am the last in line

Verse 2:
Lost in my confusing,
and begging to be found,
shattered for the last time,
things have gone straight down,
Coming from a broken place,
there's nothing I can do,
with nothing on my mind but pain,
I seem to think of you

Chorus x1

Bridge:
Where have you been?
Where did you go?
I need you now, I need you now.
What has become,
of this life,
What have we found?
What have we found?

Chorus x1

Verse 3:
Erase these memories of grief,
they're winged and on their way,
take away this pain I feel,
and make it yesterday,
find out what is really mine,
tell me before you leave,
are you really gone this time?
You need to need to be

Chorus x1
#2
Quote by MusicHead32
A buzzing ringing in my ears,
the ball comes from the wall,
where did I go so wrong?
please tell me yesterday is gone,
I've got nothing to live or die for,
I can not find the truth,
with nothing on my mind but pain,
i seem to think of you

pretty neat though the 2nd line doesnt make sense to me..

Quote by MusicHead32
Sink into regret,
fall into pieces,
I can show you what it's like,
Sink into regret,
fall into pieces,
I am the last in line

nice chorus

Quote by MusicHead32
Lost in my confusing,
and begging to be found,
shattered for the last time,
things have gone straight down,
Coming from a broken place,
there's nothing I can do,
with nothing on my mind but pain,
I seem to think of you

nothing to crit here, good job..

Quote by MusicHead32
Erase these memories of grief,
they're winged and on their way,
take away this pain I feel,
and make it yesterday,
find out what is really mine,
tell me before you leave,
are you really gone this time?
You need to need to be

this is fine, nothing to crit, the bridge is ok too, and it's nice that u have a 3rd verse to follow the bridge...

ill give it 8.5/10. well done! that's ok, im 15 too. crit mine please thanks and good luck! ^^;