#1
i decided to just mess around with the guitar today im not saying its amazing but im satisfied i am a noob been playin like 10 months so dont be to harsh

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called playing around
#2
Yo man, just get that on beat more and take out whatever chord that was just before the minute and you got a pretty damn good tune in the making. I can't quite put my finger on the sound, but i like it.
#3
ok man ty you mean the last chord or at the 1:00 part too bad i cant sing :p
#4
The chord right before 1:00 into the song, i think it starts at 54 sec. just doesnt seem to fit. and everyone can sing, its just a matter of being brave enough to do it. get it on beat first.