#2
Crits:

Vocals: strained, off-pitch
Chords : repetetive, droning
Rhythm: off

Keep at it, you'll improve.
#3
ditto
Suhr Custom, Flaxwood Rautia or Grosh Tele thru
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Analogman BiComp
Texas Two Step OD
Fulltone Ultimate Octave/Fuzz
Boss CE-2
TC Nova Delay
SLO-100, 65 London or Bogner Shiva
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#4
Yeah, the singing really brings it down. The voice just sounds too soft to do these kind of vocals.
I'm not very active here on UG currently.
I'm a retired Supermod off to the greener pastures of the real world.