#1
I'm a beginner and this is the first set of lyrics I wrote..... comments?


It wasn?t always like this
We were once just friends
Easy going, nothing to worry about
I wonder how it can change all in a blink of an eye

I still don?t understand what happened
Suddenly I found myself falling
Drowning in my feelings for you
Overwhelmed by dreams of being with you
I just can?t help it anymore

You?re a miracle, oh yes you are
You?re a miracle to me
How much I wish
To look you in the eyes
And tell you my feelings
And to say, ?I love you?

Girl you?re different
Unlike anything I?ve seen before,
Anyone I?ve meet before
You?ve turned my life upside down, inside out

Every little thing you do
Every word that came from you
Its easy to make me weak inside
I can?t ride this roller coaster anymore
It?s driving me nuts

You?re a miracle, oh yes you are
You?re a miracle to me
How much I wish
To look you in the eyes
And tell you my feelings
And to say, ?I love you?

Some things aren?t meant to be
Right from the start
I know you can?t be with me now
Can?t say the words to you now
But I?m willing to wait
In the realm of eternity

You?re a miracle, oh yes you are
You?re a miracle to me
How much I wish
To look you in the eyes
And tell you my feelings
And to say, ?I love you?

I can?t be asking too much
All I want is to be with you.
#3
umm... well, considering its ur first, its alright. uve got a few good bits and pieces, but it sounds a bit, im not sure how to say this nicely, but it sounds a bit immature. predictable. =/ its very young, "think im in love" teenager-ish song. i mean, its a good start tho. maybe try thinking about the chorus being "shes a miracle, oh yeah she is, shes a miracle to me" and so forth, replacing "you" with "she" i dunno, think about those types of options. but good start. revision is key.