i have no idea why i wrote this, i was just bored and wrote what came to mind. please crit, i know its kind of corny, crit for crit and all that crap

fleeting hearts keep the beat

dear love of my life
i wish you could have been my wife
but we know its to late
after all the times we hate
these things
that rips us apart
come like a knife through the dark

i cant be there for you this time
because these lights have made me blind
and the passion we once would share
now gives us a reason to care
abou the life
we once had
that now has no purpose but death

i love you
are my last three words
this is my suicide note
for you have killed me
with your ghastly words
good bye