#1
where is my fight if i can't fight it,
where is the sting of your ambition,
why can't i move without your desition
and now it's all down hill from here,

where is your nice and selfless compasion,
i think i detroyed it with you,
this lonely heart stings,
just put it out of it's misary,

what ever happened to the sun that shows,
this new sun is worthless to my thought,
my feet are cold and im looking for a way out,
i hate sleeping on this worthless cot,

i've been shot theres no other way too see it,
i'm all calus so i can't feel it,
cause ive been trampled on,
sitting on solid ground,

where is my fight if i can't fight it,
where is the sting of your ambition,
why can't i move without your desition
and now it's all down hill from here,

--------------------please rate--------------------
i think this is one of my better ones.
Last edited by neil-one at May 7, 2006,
#5
Aside from some obvious spelling errors, I liked this. You're looking for a rating...so I'll say 7/10.
#7
rwcmachoman songs doesn't have to be with to much rhymes...

I think this is a very good song! well as mentioned few spelling mistake
and the ending line need to be changed but after all it's great I really liked it
hmm I think, from 1 out of 10 it'll get a 9!