#1
It's an acoustic entitled "Shadows of No One"

You can listen here: www.myspace.com/wonderlandjailbreak

I might not keep it for this band, and just keep it for myself. What do you guys think?
Guitars:
Fender Standard Strat
Fender Deluxe Active Jazz Bass
Martin DX1

Amps:
Peavey Classic 50/212

Pedal Board:
Gator 8-Bus
Boss TU-2 Tuner
Digitech Bad Monkey
Ibanez CF7 Chorus/Flanger
ISP Decimator
Dual button footswitch
#2
Dude the guitar is cool there seem to be some rattiling of the strings in the solo but its tiny and barely noticable but the vocals sound like the singer has a bad cold(for keep me sane use something that doesnt copy another bands intro, its the same as cherry kiss by From autumn to ashes)
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Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves


My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun
#3
Thanks for the advice.

And sorry about the vocals, when I mastered it, I ****ed around with the gain switches too much and couldn't set em back to normal. I'm going to attempt to redo that. Or maybe I'll just redo the whole thing (This whole song was improv; Chord progression, vocals, and solo)
Guitars:
Fender Standard Strat
Fender Deluxe Active Jazz Bass
Martin DX1

Amps:
Peavey Classic 50/212

Pedal Board:
Gator 8-Bus
Boss TU-2 Tuner
Digitech Bad Monkey
Ibanez CF7 Chorus/Flanger
ISP Decimator
Dual button footswitch
#4
Yeah I know what u mean bout the vocals (should heard my bands first, damn viruses) u might as well redo the song and fix the vocals so it sounds better. Maybe make a version that is'nt acoustic it would sound pretty cool to.
Quote by unfathomable_bo
Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves


My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun
#5
i like the acoustic sound to it
vocals are a bit off
the lead needs to be a lot louder its barely audiable
but the lead is pretty good though
i didnt like the end though, there was a large break then the guitar comes back in?
i think scrap the ending

7/10! good stuff keep it up!

crit 4 crit?? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=355478
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Oh, and azza, you're a pretty good writer! Graybass is a god amongst men and you're turning real quick to be his new messiah lol.

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You're doing good, mate.

Keep up the good work.

I'll take A for $500, Alex.
#6
You guys are decent. Work on some multitrack recordings tho.
Guitars:
Fender Standard Strat
Fender Deluxe Active Jazz Bass
Martin DX1

Amps:
Peavey Classic 50/212

Pedal Board:
Gator 8-Bus
Boss TU-2 Tuner
Digitech Bad Monkey
Ibanez CF7 Chorus/Flanger
ISP Decimator
Dual button footswitch