I deleted my other thread which only got one repli so i could make this one, hope that is allowed. I just wrote this song, please crit.

Thinkin about you again

intro:Sittin' alone on friday night
I'm missin' you, you aint got a clue
You have no idea, my feelings for you

Chorus: You are on my mind
I'm thinkin bout you again
i don't just want to be friends
I want this to work between us
but how can it work, if you don't know how i feel for you

Verse: Maybe i am too young to feel something like this
But i know what love is
Love is you and me
but love has a price, it aint free

Verse: Why cant i stop thinkin about you
why does it always have to be this way
why can't you get a clue?

(Reapeat chorus)
(guitar solo)

Outro: I am thinkin bout you again
girl lets be more then friends
I'm thinkin bout you again
lets be more then friends

founder of the dunlop pick fan club

RIP Roger "Syd" Barrett

"Let the good times roll"
When I see the lyrics to this song I think of a more boy band feel. It's very cleched (spelling?) and just sin't that creative.

did you know the major scale on a piano, starting at whatever note (lets say E). you just go straight up the white keys without hitting a black one. and you got the major scale.