The intro and main riff sound really great man! You should probably work on the solos a bit more and record them at a highe volume! Overall i'd say around 8/10. Keep up the great work!
I really haven't heard this song before, but it sounds great. Yes, a lead guitar should be a bit louder. But other than that, great.

And thanks for criting my Super Colossal.
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