#1
ok i am aware that there is another song with the same name!!

but i wasnt to know when i wrote it-that was a year ago.

my band is called vision of glory and we did a live recording in our local recording studio.

we think it went quite well, and this is the usual favorite of the tracks.

http://www.purevolume.com/visionofglory (go to red sky)

ps. i am aware my singing isnt great, im getting alot better though. plus im sixteen and my voice is a bit crapped up by puberty but i know thats no excuse!!

what do you think?
#3
no i agree, you guys are pretty cool. that voice aint that bad dude!
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#4
That is pretty cool, i think the fingerpicking should be done on an acoustic, that's if you take it to a proper recording.

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#5
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That is pretty cool, i think the fingerpicking should be done on an acoustic, that's if you take it to a proper recording.


thats an awesome idea, cheers man!
#6
i liked it to
yer k i wont comment on the singing, its not bad though, much better than some others ive heard
i really liked the start
but the electric chords seem kinda tinny to me
didnt like the start of the solo but once u got into it it was much better
good lead out
didnt like htose 2 last chords stuck on the end though!!

great work i give it a 7/10

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