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this is just a small poem i wrote a couple of weeks ago and i was wondering what you guys thought.

Trials

Have I become the person I swore to never become???
I?m so confused, losing my mind, disillusion???
Coming clean, but secrets becoming me,
Drowning in a shadow of my mistakes,

Trials, why have I turned out to be this person???
I don?t know, trying to forget my mistakes,
Skeletons in my closet, so confused,
I?m feeling like a burnt fuse,

I?ve run into a fork in the road,
I have become a fallen stone,
I?m feeling like a worn out shoe,
A broken tool without a use,

plz crit, and i might add another verse at the end. tell me what you think