#1
1st song i've ever written so any help is great, its sonnet style

Initial taste of a true addiction
At the mercy of our final good bye
Might as well have been his crucifixion
For this demise of a natural high

Society full of expectations
And a December sky will bare witness
It was not just a simple vacation
Mutual silence left him action less

In the gentle greens we stood side by side
In parking lots we only grew closer
The end was a result of self pride
Nothing on his sleeves stoned wall composure

She released the doves from the rusted cage
New material as he takes the stage
~We Rock Out With Our Cocks Out!: UG Naked Club.~
Post a naked picture of yourself with your guitar to join.


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Hey you look kind of like me.

Except for the sexy man goatee, and kickass shades. And sweet guitar.

I'm jealous.
#3
Ja, es its ganz gut, aber es ist nicht ein songe? Es its ein gedicht..
What Comes Before Part B? Partaaaaay!

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lmao psykopoo ur a bloody genius!
#5
Its a half rhyme. You can make it rhyme depending on how you pronounce "Witness". Nyeah.
What Comes Before Part B? Partaaaaay!

Quote by HammettHead
lmao psykopoo ur a bloody genius!