Hi i'm new here, i've just recently started playing guitar and i've written a couple songs. I'm still working on adding more technical stuff to my songs but it's hard to be creative and technical. My internet's kinda ****ed so i just have a clip of a song, but any critiqing would be helpful especially on quality or creativity. Thanks

Thanks man! Yeah right after the intro lead finishes the distorted guitars kick in. As soon as my internet starts workin i'll up the rest of the song. I've tried using fruity loops in the past for drum stuff but couldn't figure it out. Any suggestions on drum programs?