#1
Fallen Down

V1

These long dark corridors
Have to much light
I shouldnt see these faces
To my right
The imprints of death
Engraved upon the wall
Shrieks of pain
Are heard by all

V2
These somber footsteps
Echo through the hall
I cant see anyone
Here at all
My feet fall down
Into someones track
I cant figure out
Where Im at

Ch1
Ive fallen down
Without a clue
Were can I go
So I can be with you
Im all alone
Struggling through the night
I dont want to
Start this fight

V3
There in the distance
Sitting all alone
A light surrounds you
In your throne
An outstretched hand
A guiding heart
You wont let me
Fall apart

V4
I need you
More than anything
An guiding hand
You help me stand
Your light is
All I need
To help me up
Off my knees

Ch2
Ive fallen down
But you help me up
Alls I needed
Was your touch
What I fell in
Was my sin
Your forgave me
Youre all I need
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ending is faded out and ending with a niffty hammer on


let me know what you think
#5
The lyrics are cool.
Are you talking about being lost and Love (or someone) being the only saviour during your dark moment?

I am really analytical when it comes to lyrics, so don't take offense.

Thanks!

Good Job, though.

P.S.
what style, or genre of music?
#6
i am lost, but i know there is a way out, and i am looking for it. and then i found the man (jesus, and yes i am christian, but that is the only connection through out the song, and it is kinda sutble). or take it for a friend to help you out that you always know will be there for you.

the style...its not slow but not fast i have a picking pattern that goes great with it, but i also a have an amazing strumming pattern for it. but i would compare it Lifehouse's "you and me" but i didnt get any inspration for Lifehouse as i have heard that song only one it my life. but it is along that line. more mellow and soft than rock and rollish

no i dont take offense to you asking any of your analytical questions.