#1
A song I recorded, hope to add a bass line and drum parts to it, (all played by me). Feel free to listen to the other songs too, but RawkHammer is the main one, I just uploaded it.

Tell me what you think, what I could do, I want Critique.

Thanks

EDIT:Need a link eH! http://athenasghost.dmusic.com/
#2
u got a real nice riff going on here
sounds a bit like crazy train in a good way
i recommenc adding any knid of melody to song which this seems to like
maybe vocals or a solo?
nice job

crit back?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=353803
#3
Quote by luyangzheng
u got a real nice riff going on here
sounds a bit like crazy train in a good way
i recommenc adding any knid of melody to song which this seems to like
maybe vocals or a solo?
nice job

crit back?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=353803


Thanks for the Crit, your song was well done, I enjoyed it very much, and I plan to add a bass line, maybe write some vocals to it in the future!

Thanks

~AthenasGhost [NDE]
#4
It sounds like a pretty cool riff. He's right about the vox or solo though. without it, the song's kinda repetitive. I was thinking you might also want to crank up the distortion after that kinda bridge part. This reminds of something from Led Zeppelin or something like that back in the day. Pretty cool riff. Could you hit me w/ a crit back??

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#5
I like the riffs, very catchy, all it needs now are some drums and vox. Drop me a PM when they're done? I'd love to hear them.