#1

e-------------------------------------------|
B-------------------------------------------|
G-------------------------------------------|
D-------------------------------------------|
A-------------------------------------------|
D-0-0-3-5-6-5-3-0-|-0-0-3-5-6-5-3-0


i know its hard to read rythm in tablature.......but lets call them all.......eighth notes, in 4/4 time...........if that helps, its my first riff, any modifications help. Thanks in advance.
#4
turn the first two open D's into palm muted power chords, and it becomes powerful.

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#5
Ouy, I just realized I said power chords will make it powerful.
(kills self)
Anyway, this is what I mean:
e----------------------
B----------------------
G----------------------
D-0-0-----------------
A-0-0-----------------
D-0-0-3-5-6-5-3-0-
pm__|

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#6
Ya with the open palm muting, it could turn into a breakdown or something. Otherwise could be used as an intro liek I said.
#8
e|----------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|-7-7-777--------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-7-7-777-6-6--0--0-0-0-(don't play this 2nd time)---------------------|x4
A|-5-5-555-6-6--0--0-0-0-5-3-5-6-5-3-0----------------------------------|
D|-0-0-000-6-6--0--0-0-0-5-3-5-6-5-3-0----------------------------------|

see
#9
Quote by Air Guitarist!
you know you obviously stole that from the beginning of bat country by avenged sevenfold

Arse, just because it's similar doesn't make it stolen. It may be influenced by that song, but not stolen.

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#10
Quote by SteveHouse
Arse, just because it's similar doesn't make it stolen. It may be influenced by that song, but not stolen.


Ya I have written little things and then realized that they sound very similiar to another song. That is going to happen because you are influenced by the music that you know.
#11
Lets face it, almost everythign has been done before, i dont listen to Avenged Sevenfold let alone know how to play there songs.........thanks for the tips. I suck at writing music lol
#12
Quote by Air Guitarist!
you know you obviously stole that from the beginning of bat country by avenged sevenfold


Not even close. Just because he wrote something in Dm doesn't mean he stole it from Avenged.